100 wc week #21

                                                    Twig Statues

         Today was the day everyone was waiting for Halloween day! So my dad a.k.a the mayor said to celebrate Halloween we will have a spooky picnic dressed like our beloved trees. The whole town ( minus the kids ) was there but then it stated raining cats and dogs the picnic was completely ruined! but as the rain dripped down into their costumes it started to harden. Know the whole town was freaking out but within the next 5 minutes everyone was a statue. I am so glad kids were not allowed because i'm now the mayor of kids town.

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  1. Gill E23 February 2018 at 21:00

    Great variation of sentence length, try to add smooth transitions from one sentence to another.

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