100wc week #22
Dreams
I slowly walked into the kitchen, dark circles under my eyes. "Morning honey!' said my cheerful mom handing me pancakes,"How'd you sleep?"
"I had a terrible dream."
"Oh? What happened?"
"So it was a normal day at school and our teacher announced that we will be getting a new student, his name is Goldfish Brown. Out of nowhere he burst through the school window and planted a ladder on my desk he shouted to me "go up!" I was curious so I climbed up and it took me to my worst nightmare!" Then I left the room without touching my pancakes.
I slowly walked into the kitchen, dark circles under my eyes. "Morning honey!' said my cheerful mom handing me pancakes,"How'd you sleep?"
"I had a terrible dream."
"Oh? What happened?"
"So it was a normal day at school and our teacher announced that we will be getting a new student, his name is Goldfish Brown. Out of nowhere he burst through the school window and planted a ladder on my desk he shouted to me "go up!" I was curious so I climbed up and it took me to my worst nightmare!" Then I left the room without touching my pancakes.
I loved reading your story, you made it unique, and it included a storyline. Great use of quotations.
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